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| Author: David | August 23, 2001 at 18:17:11 |
| in reply to: Re: Story:All in The Family- Part 6 posted by slimv on August 16, 2001 at 09:44:31 | |
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I did read it, and I did enjoy it. Lots of good ideas (I like the idea of Barbara holding the cigarettes for the narrator -very erotic) and it's a change to feature heavy smoking women who *don't like* smoking. I like very much the idea of a woman suffering from her habit, hating it, but so deeply addicted she can't go ten minutes without some smoke into her, as Barbara. If you feel inspired, I'd be happy to read a story of yours with a woman trying to quit because she realizes her lungs are so damaged, including withdrawal symptoms descriptions, the feeling of smoking a cigarette after a long and horrible abstinence, etc... > Thanks for the comments. I was beginning to think no one read it. |
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