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| Author: slimv | July 28, 2001 at 08:18:38 |
| in reply to: All in the Family posted by D on July 27, 2001 at 22:15:08 | |
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> Another great story...but...how about an ending with > barbara getting lung cancer and her feelings, actions, etc. Could be. I left it open for that possibility. The story is told through first person as a recollection, so it can be recollected further. I do have one problem. I can't see Barbara's lung cancer as vividly as some of our other writers. I'd love to see one of them finish her off- that black lunged old whore. |
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